hide, pretty girl
they want to get
in your head, and
hold you like a pen,
thumb on the ribs,
index on the spine,
middle on the neck
and stroke this
they want to
by the waist
teach you to
your stuff always makes me want to cry a little bit
I love the description of where the fingers go on the body. So interesting.
Wow Vin so super consistent in the metaphor, which makes this really nice and strong without feeling forced - even if the idea of forcibly bending something into a certain shape might be kinda appropriate here.
Great rhythm Vincenzo and I love the pen metaphor.
Love the last 2 lines... The rest of its good too, just love the last two lines especially
I really like the addition,n ow that'snow that's art in the form of literature
Ain't that the truth?