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...fuck my life... by ~GetYourGrip:iconGetYourGrip:

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masses to masses touch to touch
coast to coast, how many sins can skin hold up,
senses weaken, but the heart grows stronger by the beat
drumming songs that can only play back through our feet
   she asks for some space and time;
   she asks for some universe,
   but it belongs to God, I told her
   she said, He won't mind
       I said, He'll spirit
   she said, He'll holy spirit
       I said, He'll wholly spear it
       she laughed, I laughed
               we laughed

buried in the love,
somewhere in us,
               is us,
so deep in we're choking on goodnights on good nights,
i love you, slowly suffocating, to love you, tonight
                 don't be beautiful or screwed up, my world
                         be all flight and free,
                         be all light can see,
                         be all might may breathe,
                         just be, delightedly

                         the way He is He
                                     She is She
                                     I am me
                                  and I can't leave
                                  so please, I plead...
©2009-2010 ~GetYourGrip
:icongetyourgrip:

Author's Comments

full title: fuck my life, so I can live twice

photo is (c) to :iconpati-szonek:, original deviation is here [link]

I like profound titles that are really hard to understand C:

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~AbbeyLiz Feb 4, 2009, 5:54:04 PM
This is like..awesome.. haha
I love the structure and the flow. and omg. :] haha

amazing as always, Vinnie :] :heart:

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i suggest we learn to love ourselves before its made illegal.
when will we learn? when will we change? just in time to see it all come down.


"Be open and let life happen." - George Bonvanie
:icongetyourgrip:
~GetYourGrip Feb 4, 2009, 6:02:17 PM
haha, thank you so very much :hug:

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconspongexd:
*spongeXD Feb 4, 2009, 6:23:01 PM
I like the very first lines of the first stanza, they really bring you in

--
I'm breaking the first rule of Fightclub.
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=saturninesweetness Feb 4, 2009, 6:34:48 PM
I liked the "holy/wholly" quip, and the last two stanzas were just delicious. :)


- :heart: Carolyn

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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
:icongetyourgrip:
~GetYourGrip Feb 4, 2009, 6:42:25 PM
I was almost nervous about that, so thank you.
I appreciate it :)

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconsaturninesweetness:
=saturninesweetness Feb 4, 2009, 6:43:10 PM
:]

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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
:icongetyourgrip:
~GetYourGrip Feb 4, 2009, 6:43:28 PM
why thank you, Kira :} :bow:

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconspongexd:
*spongeXD Feb 4, 2009, 6:45:54 PM
why you are welcome

--
I'm breaking the first rule of Fightclub.
:icongetyourgrip:
~GetYourGrip Feb 4, 2009, 6:56:29 PM
why you little! :rage:

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
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