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love you are
for feeling things
i am but of those,
just one

lost, we're keys
left there-right here
plain in sight
too hard a find

break my not-heart skull apart
inside you find you in the dark
what are you crying for?

real arrived and life, it bawled,
is what it's called, we're living all
the lies your eyes are
merely vibes and galaxies and nebulae
dead suns and born's a few more from
wet salt you shed from in your head
dead sons and mourns another one
embraced in blame upon his bed

i mean what it all sees,
be the me of little dreams
blurred when we breathe
deep the tree roots soon will
leave you pleads to be you
pleased to meet you
meet to please you
sleep your dreams true
the world will need you

fingernail needles
scare me none, fish
played with a seagul
and won your one wish
©2009-2010 ~GetYourGrip
:icongetyourgrip:

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goodnight, everybody.

Lost Poem # 4: Feel No Me

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:iconcrewed:
Absolutely beautiful. :)

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"I hope that one day you will have the experience of doing something you do not understand for someone you love."
Jonathan Safran Foer
:iconlance-iii:
Well done. Another beautiful piece. =)

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Over and in, last call for sin.
While everyone's lost, the battle is won,
With all these things that I've done.

From rhythm comes life, and from life comes rhythm.
:icongetyourgrip:
awesome, thanks :peace:

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconbluebanana:
I have to admit, reading poetry like this always requires longterm contemplation.

What does "...fish played with a seagul and won your own wish" mean?
:icongetyourgrip:
"...scare me none, fish. <--
played with a seagul
and won your one wish"

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconbluebanana:
Oh, okay. And what does that final verse mean?
:icongetyourgrip:
unlike the rest of the poem,
that part is kind of personal.

--
Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconmakola94:
the imagery is fascinating. :thumbsup:

this is the best part:
break my not-heart skull apart
inside you find you in the dark
what are you crying for?

:heart:


--
I write and take pictures.
yea, i'm planning immortality.
perhaps it'll happen.

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