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     fingers cold as war,
     songs sweet as life,
     too many times, too many eyes on mine, on my mind
     signals too late,
     seas of knowledge at bay,
     everything knows everyone in every way today

look at all the simple things you've got
but oh they're not, no they're not

     if you're there
     if you care
      you can right what things are wrong,
     if you give
     and learn to live
      you'll see Earth is not so small

     bodies deep as knives,
     beauty, play the chords,
     i want to taint the stars, coming from all fours on floors
     hazy daily gazing,
     love's a chilly pillow,
     everyone wants change, but why do people kill though?

look at all the things you're not
so reach, they aren't sky born to drop

     if you're there
     if you care
      you can right what things are wrong,
     if you give
     and learn to live
      you'll see Earth is not so small,
     if you don't cry
     keep your eyes dry
      then there are many things to see,
     if you believe
     then you won't bleed
      you can run away with me

         if you wish life was really free
         if you know love can truly be
         if I'm the lock and you're the key
             you can run away with me
©2009-2010 ~GetYourGrip
:icongetyourgrip:

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the lovely photo is (c) to :iconbdwfh: original deviation is over here~> [link]
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:peace: :earth:

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:iconabbeyliz:
wow, this is beautiful Vinnie :]

I absolutely love the flow and the.
Lovely :heart:

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i suggest we learn to love ourselves before its made illegal.
when will we learn? when will we change? just in time to see it all come down.


"Be open and let life happen." - George Bonvanie
:iconspongexd:
why do you still run when you can walk with me?

really beautiful, as always, it flows really nicely, if not nitpicky-more so than most of your poems, this one seems more...planned

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I'm breaking the first rule of Fightclub.
:iconbdwfh:
beautiful words, congratulations. : )

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Having a camera makes you no more a photographer than having a hammer and some nails makes you a carpenter. - Claude Adams
:icongetyourgrip:
thank you very much :) :peace:

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:icongetyourgrip:
you love the flow and the.?
OH ABBEY LOVES THE FLOW AND THE.
MY LIFE IS COMPLETE!!!

haha, always appreciated, Abbey :]
thank you greatly :heart:

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:icongetyourgrip:
meh, I wrote the second to last stanza first, then based it all around that, and the idea of peace...
and the final stanza wasn't originally there, it was sort of a last minute thing, and my favourite part :)
vaginas

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconspongexd:
well it all tied together quite nicely
:D
pubic hair

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I'm breaking the first rule of Fightclub.
:icongetyourgrip:
thank you! that's very kind of you :)
yeast infection

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Married to the pen,
and we're both having an affair
with the page.
:iconspongexd:
Arn't I so thoughtful?
(for giving you crabs)

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I'm breaking the first rule of Fightclub.

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